November 8th,
2012
Earthlings 2nd
Draft
Mr. Garrioch /
English Composition
11b4 111150 Ho
InHee
Indeed, humans
are ‘humans’ and we can learn things, but we also forget things we learn ‘as
humans’. We learn to be nice to animals, but forget few minutes later. This is
partly why many films and literatures may not have a much less powerful impact
than intended. But Earthlings is much
more effective. It has successfully affected thousands of people. In fact,
about half of the ‘Earthlings review’
videos show how people announce to be a vegetarian from the moment they watched
Earthlings. And the other half?
Surprisingly, they are those disapproving Earthlings.
Those
deprecating Earthlings say the film
is too graphic. The film IS indeed graphic. A pig is hung from the ceiling and slashed
its neck so that the blood could spatter as it writhes in pain. Scrawny cow,
staggering from bachaching labor, is put peppermint into its eyes. A white
fluffy fox is skinned alive and left uncured, with blood seeping from all over
the body. These all are surely more than simply unpleasant, they are awful. The
graphic images blow human’s vulnerable mind so hard that they make humans feel
like barbarians whenever eating a mouth-watering meat loaf. How wicked it is to
show ignorant (or even innocent) consumers like me such a horrifying footage. I
mean, I don’t play any role in that barbaric meat packing process. I’m a mere
consumer, and am totally unrelated to evil matters. I don’t deserve such
nauseous uncomfortableness that makes me want to throw the meat I had this
morning up.
Earthlings is also blamed
for being excessively one-sided. In fact, it takes than five minutes to notice
how biased this film is. No, a two-minute trailer is enough. The film, from its
start to its end, quite explicitly shows its strong conviction to human
evilness. It categorizes how humans act their evilness on animals into three
sub sections: eating, cloth, pet, entertainment, and scientific research. The
film then devotes whole two hours illustrating how these are done. We all
understand how Shaun Monson, the director, intended to accuse human’s egoistic
sins on animals, but despite this clear intention, he should have put some
human goodness into the film. Dystopian literatures are okay to solely convey a
rather ‘biased’ theme of human evilness, but Earthlings is not okay, because, maybe, it is a ‘film’.
The last
accusation against Earthlings is that
it is meaningless. The film contains invalid information. Most of the footage used
in the film- slaughterhouse actualities, circus exploitation, and all- is from
1990s. All the footage is invalid because it is now 21st century.
The world has changed. Though we use more animals for scientific research
(actually, we use 17-22 million annually[1]),
and though we consume more meat (more than 120kg per capita every year[2]),
we kill those animals more hygienically, more humanistically. Even more, the
film doesn’t have any solution. We, humans, need to sacrifice millions of
animals for the nature’s good as a whole. We, as creatures, need to consume
more than 300kg of meat every day. We need to consume leather products to avoid
freezing from death, keep pets to avoid unbearable loneliness, and visit zoos
to make our children happy. And the film doesn’t give a perfect solution for
these inevitable acts. Many essays, films, TV programs, and speeches all deal
with animal rights issues, and none of them actually gives any good solution
(because if they had, there won’t be any more animal right issues going on).
The Earthlings, however, SHOULD know
the solution that might not even exist, and offer that solution to us.
I shut my eyes
tight in the most brutal scenes and frowned in less brutal scenes. I was
depressed in spirits after watching Earthlings
and passively practiced vegetarianism for next couple of days by not eating
meat dish (yet still having meat soups). But it was a huge change to me-since I
never changed behavior so significantly. Apparently, I wasn’t alone to be
temporary vegetarian, and Earthlings successfully
affected millions of people. But it was very unsuccessful at the same time:
because the film displayed so barbaric scenes that it almost seemed unlikely, omitted
how good humans innately are, and didn’t give the perfect solution that no
other source actually have ever given till now.
Much better than your first version. More direct and definitely more indepth. You didn't have to re-write so extensively, but definitely needed a better introduction. I think the best way to improve is to learn from mistakes, and it is best to learn them in highschool than in university, where professors know pillow stuffing when they see it. Again, much improved. Glad you went the extra mile.
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